Time, seeming so elusive
Like a butterfly flitting around
Everyone tries to catch it
Find a scheme to trap its beauty
But, like a watched pot that never boils
Time settles most with those
Who try to catch it least
The ultimate paradox
For if you know in your heart
That you have all of it in the world
Then you are indeed correct
And will be truly rich beyond measure
A peace that is the ultimate gift
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Gypsy Aurora Musings 
04/14/2011 at 9:00 pm
Very nice. – Don’t take this as a criticism because this is quite wonderful the way it is. I would just suggest instead of “Believe in your heart”, instead put ” live in your heart” or “dwell in your heart”.
There are two kinds of people in the world – Those who believe and those who Know. Knowing is much better. In believe, you open the door to being corrected and proven wrong. When you Know for sure, this is a rock, a foundation, indisputable. Just my two sense worth.
Thanks for this – great job and you’re right: peace is the ultimate gift
04/14/2011 at 9:18 pm
Wonderful suggestion! Thank you 🙂 I very much appreciate the input! (and you taking the time to read and comment!) I enjoyed reading some of your work as well 🙂